Madness string 479

Random mermaid
Can't have the bow in the air or the stern higher than the mast. Looks silly, then you sink and die.

The first draft never holds up to the concept, the notes, the plan. But the first draft is simply another step along the way. Build on it. Treat it as a framework, an open world, the platform on which to go back to the concept art and fill in all the rest.